A Summer Day

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July-27- 2025

Tricube Challenge Poetry

Sponsor- Oliver Mckeithan

Lovely Day No dismay Sing away Blazing sun Children run So much fun Summer bliss Wind’s soft kiss Do not miss!

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/30/2025 10:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write with a great picture. Have a blessed day with your win.........

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/30/2025 2:18:00 AM

Back with heartfelt congratulations on your Podium win with this well-crafted Tricube, dear Valsa.

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 7/29/2025 12:50:00 PM

Congrats on your placement in my contest Valsa. Like the picture that fits well with your entry.

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 7/29/2025 11:23:00 AM

Congratulations Valsa on your placement in this contest with a lovely piece on summer bliss which we cannot miss. Wish you a blissful summer day.

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/27/2025 2:57:00 PM

Ah yes! Youth -- and summer: pool parties, picnics. Romance. Your lovely little poem captures all beautifully.

John Fleming

Date: 7/27/2025 10:59:00 AM

A pleasant little piece of enjoyable verse. :) john

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/27/2025 10:50:00 AM

The imagery and the deep meaning of those words are astounding. What you submitted for this contest is fantastic, dear Valsa. Warmest Wishes

Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/27/2025 8:34:00 AM

Such a joyful little gem! It perfectly captures the carefree spirit of a beautiful summer day.

Tom Woody

Date: 7/27/2025 6:12:00 AM

Is there anything lovelier than the sound of children playing under the sun? You e captured that essence here Valsa. Have a pleasant Sunday