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July-27- 2025
Tricube Challenge Poetry
Sponsor- Oliver Mckeithan

 

Lovely Day No dismay Sing away Blazing sun Children run So much fun Summer bliss Wind’s soft kiss Do not miss!

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Date: 7/27/2025 2:57:00 PM
Ah yes! Youth -- and summer: pool parties, picnics. Romance. Your lovely little poem captures all beautifully.
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Date: 7/27/2025 10:59:00 AM
A pleasant little piece of enjoyable verse. :) john
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Date: 7/27/2025 10:50:00 AM
The imagery and the deep meaning of those words are astounding. What you submitted for this contest is fantastic, dear Valsa. Warmest Wishes
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Date: 7/27/2025 8:34:00 AM
Such a joyful little gem! It perfectly captures the carefree spirit of a beautiful summer day.
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Date: 7/27/2025 6:12:00 AM
Is there anything lovelier than the sound of children playing under the sun? You e captured that essence here Valsa. Have a pleasant Sunday
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