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Under the Starry Night

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the day we met~
the sky was in bloom 
with  soft serenading stars
enticing beguiling Belgian blues
of varied hypnotic hues

as you held me close
to your arms~
I heard the cypress
singing sweet symphony
as the moon faded
into swirling sapphire clouds

the symphony lingered on~
soared on sleeping sky 
as the  specks of stardust
shine upon our skin
bathing in melodic moonlight
under the starry night

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Date: 5/20/2023 8:24:00 AM
This is pretty fascinating and inventive poetry, and the form suits it perfectly.
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Date: 4/23/2023 8:07:00 AM
wow, i agree with Janice . A very cool creative poem in this unique form. Congrats too
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Date: 4/20/2023 5:58:00 AM
JCB, this is such a lovely, creative piece! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 4/19/2023 10:02:00 PM
Hi Jez, lovely penning . Congratulations on your great win !
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Date: 4/19/2023 9:21:00 PM
Wonderful writing, Brul:)
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