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Under the Starry Night

the day we met~
the sky was in bloom 
with  soft serenading stars
enticing beguiling Belgian blues
of varied hypnotic hues

as you held me close
to your arms~
I heard the cypress
singing sweet symphony
as the moon faded
into swirling sapphire clouds

the symphony lingered on~
soared on sleeping sky 
as the  specks of stardust
shine upon our skin
bathing in melodic moonlight
under the starry night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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May 20, 2023 at 8:24 AM
This is pretty fascinating and inventive poetry, and the form suits it perfectly.
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 8:07 AM
wow, i agree with Janice . A very cool creative poem in this unique form. Congrats too
Canerdy Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 5:58 AM
JCB, this is such a lovely, creative piece! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
George Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 10:02 PM
Hi Jez, lovely penning . Congratulations on your great win !
Daniel Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 9:21 PM
Wonderful writing, Brul:)
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