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Tibetan Flutes

Here we are 
       this and now  
          never turn your heart away !
Hear the song
 that comes out strong 
                then sweet ...
pure upon your lips of red

Birds of paradise 
              fly high 
           as they soar towards 
                         the sun ! 

Here we are 
                you and I 
                        living for the other 
                            as if we'll never die !

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Robert Pettit Date: 7/31/2025 4:31:00 PM Your words are sweeter that the music that lady is playing on her flute. Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 7/31/2025 11:01:00 AM Nice. Beautiful. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/31/2025 12:29:00 PM Glad you enjoyed the soft notes of a flute, even if its on computer, you an only imagine Jay, :)

Eileen Manassian Date: 7/31/2025 4:08:00 AM Sweet sweet sweet. Just what I needed to lighten my day. Loved this, MR. That kind of love is what we all long for. Blessings. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/31/2025 12:29:00 PM Your angelic presence is welcome here :) thanks you Eileen

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/31/2025 3:06:00 AM Enchanting. I love the sound of the flute, it rises and falls in a great symphony. And when it echoes, its mastery. Hugs Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/31/2025 12:28:00 PM Yes it is, soft and subtle speaking to the soul in its own special octave Victor, thankyou for taking the time to leave a comment, be well!

Arthur Vaso Date: 7/30/2025 9:37:00 PM Beautiful! Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/31/2025 12:28:00 PM Glad your ear fell to its beauty so did mine Arthur, thanks for your kind visit, take care

Bill Baker Date: 7/30/2025 5:42:00 PM A love poem presented to use from Tibetan Flutes, the words rhythmic and smooth like savored love. When I read the last verse, it reminds me of Sara and I as we grow old together, lovely and comforting thoughts. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your lovely poetry, Vie. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/31/2025 12:27:00 PM Always peaceful to have a listen to a flute, thanks for your kind visit Bill, much appreciated :)

Jan Allison Date: 7/30/2025 5:00:00 PM aww this is super sweet and romantic Vienna:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/31/2025 12:27:00 PM I love the flute so calming Jan, thanks for your visit here