Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

Tibetan Flutes

Here we are 
       this and now  
          never turn your heart away !
Hear the song
 that comes out strong 
                then sweet ...
pure upon your lips of red

Birds of paradise 
              fly high 
           as they soar towards 
                         the sun ! 

Here we are 
                you and I 
                        living for the other 
                            as if we'll never die !

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Robert Pettit July 31, 2025 at 4:31 PM Your words are sweeter that the music that lady is playing on her flute.

Jay Narain July 31, 2025 at 11:01 AM Nice. Beautiful. Mystic Rose Rose July 31, 2025 at 12:29 PM Glad you enjoyed the soft notes of a flute, even if its on computer, you an only imagine Jay, :)

Eileen Manassian July 31, 2025 at 4:08 AM Sweet sweet sweet. Just what I needed to lighten my day. Loved this, MR. That kind of love is what we all long for. Blessings. Mystic Rose Rose July 31, 2025 at 12:29 PM Your angelic presence is welcome here :) thanks you Eileen

Victor Buhagiar July 31, 2025 at 3:06 AM Enchanting. I love the sound of the flute, it rises and falls in a great symphony. And when it echoes, its mastery. Hugs Mystic Rose Rose July 31, 2025 at 12:28 PM Yes it is, soft and subtle speaking to the soul in its own special octave Victor, thankyou for taking the time to leave a comment, be well!

Arthur Vaso July 30, 2025 at 9:37 PM Beautiful! Mystic Rose Rose July 31, 2025 at 12:28 PM Glad your ear fell to its beauty so did mine Arthur, thanks for your kind visit, take care

Bill Baker July 30, 2025 at 5:42 PM A love poem presented to use from Tibetan Flutes, the words rhythmic and smooth like savored love. When I read the last verse, it reminds me of Sara and I as we grow old together, lovely and comforting thoughts. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your lovely poetry, Vie. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Mystic Rose Rose July 31, 2025 at 12:27 PM Always peaceful to have a listen to a flute, thanks for your kind visit Bill, much appreciated :)

Jan Allison July 30, 2025 at 5:00 PM aww this is super sweet and romantic Vienna:-) hugs jan xx Mystic Rose Rose July 31, 2025 at 12:27 PM I love the flute so calming Jan, thanks for your visit here