The Fickle Fate of Friendship

Did you think my friendship fickle,
thus deserving of the sickle
did you think that it would wither up and die?

Did you think my friendship faded
thus transforming true to jaded
did you think you could revive if you try?

Did you think my friendship lacking,
thus you sent me swiftly packing
did you think that you should stop and ask me why?

Did you think my friendship ended
thus presumed it can't be mended
did you think that you could leave without goodbye?

Well, my dear, let me assure you
That as friend, this girl is true blue
did you think I'd let you simply walk away?

Quiet wrong is your surmising,
and I find it quite surprising
that you'd think this friendship's was not here to stay

So, now listen, friend, just listen
Let these word's of friendship glisten
as on through these lines of poetry you play

I'll be here though sometimes silent
With a heart that's supple, pliant
Write the words, and don't be doubtful, dear, I pray!

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 10/10/2024 9:47:00 PM
People can be this way.... very true and forthcoming words. <3
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Date: 4/25/2020 1:01:00 PM
A true friend through thick and thin ... even if (and sometimes especially if) the other person doesn't quite realize it. Your words ring true what are the primary qualities of a friend: commitment. For me, I'd much prefer one of two real friends than a crowd of fake friends. Liked what you had to say here, Eileen.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/5/2025 3:26:00 PM
The Hicksmeister!
Date: 3/23/2020 10:07:00 AM
Great poetry my friend as is your usual fare. True friendship is a much treasured gem. Sometimes a friend is better to a person than is a brother or sister. Your heartfelt poem sets the example of what friendship should be..' A true gem and a fav too...God bless...
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Date: 3/15/2020 8:53:00 AM
As usual, Eileen your poetry, full of meaning, sincerity, and truth..this is a wonderful rendering from the heart, i felt it as i'm sure everyone else that reads it will also...so glad to see you back again,
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Date: 3/13/2020 3:09:00 PM
Nice piece Eileen, excellently penned with nice insightful and fine imagery. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 3/8/2020 7:35:00 PM
What an encouraging song of friendship! I am glad to make your acquaintance today :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2020 2:30:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle. you're welcome to my page anytime.
Date: 3/8/2020 5:25:00 PM
You are a good friend Eileen... Sadly though some people don't deserve such friendship..
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2020 2:31:00 PM
Thanks for the visit, SO. Yes, life has many lessons to teach us about where to invest our love and friendship. Glad you stopped by.
Date: 3/8/2020 9:29:00 AM
Friendship like a flower requires nurturing. To say you are a friend and to be a friend are two very different things. Thanks for posting a thought provoking piece.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2020 2:31:00 PM
Glad to have your visit, Richard....and thanks for being a forever friend.
Date: 3/8/2020 8:51:00 AM
It is lovely to see you posting again Eileen. Your presence is so welcome. I enjoyed this sweet piece. xxoo
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2020 2:32:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, dear. I'm trying to get back into the swing of things. Hugs
Date: 3/8/2020 8:23:00 AM
Some of things we do for friends is worth fighting for. And with good true friends we want to do more. I like how your poem can almost be sung. Nicely done.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2020 2:33:00 PM
I've always wanted to write the lyrics to a song...hope I can get the hang of it finally. Thanks for your observation.
Date: 3/7/2020 3:59:00 PM
Eileen, great write, yes ,sometimes a friendship fading is worth fighting for _Constance
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2020 2:33:00 PM
I know a true friend from one who isn't...and yes. I will fight for a true friendship at all costs. Thanks for the visit, dear. :)
Date: 3/7/2020 8:31:00 AM
Love this Eileen! Great rhythm, moves fast with feeling. A true friend if only one sided...always there, waiting, praying, loving...all in! Fave! Love the title too being a fan of “Laugh-In”
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2020 2:34:00 PM
:) Thank you for your visit and comment, Kim. I appreciate your thoughts on the matter. Blessings.
Date: 3/7/2020 5:33:00 AM
Our friendship will never be something fickle, or that it will ever be sent packing, Eileen!! Your absence from Soup, due to other priorities, does not mean that you have been forgotten. Welcome back! Love // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2020 2:35:00 PM
What a deliciously heart warming comment, Paul. :) You are forever with me. Thanks for your kind comment. How I dream of one day visiting Malta again. Please stay safe...
Date: 3/6/2020 7:54:00 PM
Hi Eileen, It’s soooo good to see you posting again. I hope all is well with you. And your New Year has been good thus far. Your lines show what real friendship is all about. Enjoy the rest of your evening my friend:-) Alexis
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2020 2:38:00 PM
My friend...what a nice ending to your post, Alexis. Thanks for dropping by, dear. Always good to get a visit from you. Blessings.
Date: 3/6/2020 7:07:00 PM
oh, so nice to see you. A friendship always glisten dear friend.. Love the verse. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/6/2020 5:45:00 PM
This is wonderful, Eileen. Very flowing and thoughtful. It's a treat to see you back
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2020 2:38:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. It is good to be back among friends. :)
Date: 3/6/2020 5:19:00 PM
Eileen, I never once doubted... your pen is always insightful and incisive. Love the alliterative title, the stream of rhetorical questions, and the affirmation that you are loyal to the end. Well done, poetess! ~ John
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/5/2025 3:27:00 PM
Watt??
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2020 2:39:00 PM
Thank you, John, for your lovely post. It's post like these, affirmative ones...that make one want to come back time and again. :) Blessings.
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