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TEXAS PRAIRIE PARADISE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
here, where the horizon bends. the morning sun spills its warmth. the Texas prairie stretches~ a vast unbroken beauty where golden grasses sway. the air, thick with the scent of sage, wraps around me like a familiar embrace. dust motes dance in the light, tiny galaxies suspended in the quiet splendor of morning. cacti punctuate the landscape these sentinels of resilience, their spines reminding me that life thrives in the harshest of places, and wildflowers burst forth, fragile yet fierce. here, the earth breathes differently. my heart learns to listen to the distant call of a hawk, to the rustle of a rabbit, and to the soft sighs of the prairie. the hawk circles high above me, its shadow gliding across the land, a guardian of this sprawling solitude, reminds me of the freedom, of the vastness within and without. I stand rooted in this stillness, finding clarity. in the expanse, I find belonging. beneath the wide-open sky, I am both lost and found.

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Date: 7/27/2025 7:51:00 AM
Beautifully written and evocative. Your stunning imagery drew me in, and I felt like I was there, wrapped in every verse. Bravo!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/27/2025 5:47:00 PM
thank you, dear Franci, for your gracious, kind, and complimentary words. I'm grateful you found my words compelling enough that you felt you were here in Texas with me. Thank you for stopping by, hugs, Sara
Date: 7/25/2025 1:18:00 AM
Hello Sara, this is an enjoyable read and a great write. Makes me want to see it. Have a wonderful day.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/25/2025 5:38:00 PM
Thank you, Zyrool, for visiting and for your kind words. Texas is a 'must see' state :-) have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 7/24/2025 8:43:00 PM
To me, poetry should evoke emotion. This poem does. The emotion should be driven by metaphor. This poem does. One characteristic of poety is that of rhyme. I agree with a famous poet Robert Frost who said poetry should rhyme. Specifically, he said, “Writing free verse is like playing tennis with the net down.” ~~Robert Frost (1874–1963) I see this poem as one that is very good, but could be outstanding.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/25/2025 5:38:00 PM
thanks for visiting, Richard, and for your analytical comments. I'd never read that Frost quote, but it makes sense. Appreciate the input; enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 7/24/2025 8:11:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry. This makes me want to come to Texas though to see a prairie.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/25/2025 5:37:00 PM
thanks for visiting, Annabel! Glad you liked my poem and that it created a desire to visit Texas. It's truly an unusual state, wishing you pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 7/21/2025 9:05:00 PM
And brilliant my sweet poet. I love reading your poet, Sara. Hugs, Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/25/2025 5:36:00 PM
thank you, hubby! You're the best. hugs, me.
Date: 7/21/2025 6:32:00 AM
We don't have those enormous wide open spaces with their vast skies in the UK that you lucky Texans have...but we do still have the Moorlands. I understand exactly what you feel. Love your poem. :) john
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/21/2025 5:11:00 PM
thanks for visiting, John. Yes, we Texans are lucky as are you with the Moorlands...glad you can identify with the words, have a great evening :-) sara
Date: 7/20/2025 12:20:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write/story. Great Picture... Have a wonderful day writing away...........
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/20/2025 4:57:00 PM
thanks, Paula, for visiting and for commenting. have a pleasant week ahead
Date: 7/20/2025 4:31:00 AM
So nice read! "the air, thick with the scent of sage" wonderful line! A favorite.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/20/2025 4:57:00 PM
awww, thank you for your encouraging words and for the fav. Color me grateful

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