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TEXAS PRAIRIE PARADISE

TEXAS PRAIRIE PARADISE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
here, where the horizon bends. the morning sun spills its warmth. the Texas prairie stretches~ a vast unbroken beauty where golden grasses sway. the air, thick with the scent of sage, wraps around me like a familiar embrace. dust motes dance in the light, tiny galaxies suspended in the quiet splendor of morning. cacti punctuate the landscape these sentinels of resilience, their spines reminding me that life thrives in the harshest of places, and wildflowers burst forth, fragile yet fierce. here, the earth breathes differently. my heart learns to listen to the distant call of a hawk, to the rustle of a rabbit, and to the soft sighs of the prairie. the hawk circles high above me, its shadow gliding across the land, a guardian of this sprawling solitude, reminds me of the freedom, of the vastness within and without. I stand rooted in this stillness, finding clarity. in the expanse, I find belonging. beneath the wide-open sky, I am both lost and found.
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Hoffman Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 7:51 AM
Beautifully written and evocative. Your stunning imagery drew me in, and I felt like I was there, wrapped in every verse. Bravo!
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July 27, 2025 at 5:47 PM
thank you, dear Franci, for your gracious, kind, and complimentary words. I'm grateful you found my words compelling enough that you felt you were here in Texas with me. Thank you for stopping by, hugs, Sara
Gifford Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 1:18 AM
Hello Sara, this is an enjoyable read and a great write. Makes me want to see it. Have a wonderful day.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 5:38 PM
Thank you, Zyrool, for visiting and for your kind words. Texas is a 'must see' state :-) have a pleasant evening, Sara
Morris Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 8:43 PM
To me, poetry should evoke emotion. This poem does. The emotion should be driven by metaphor. This poem does. One characteristic of poety is that of rhyme. I agree with a famous poet Robert Frost who said poetry should rhyme. Specifically, he said, “Writing free verse is like playing tennis with the net down.” ~~Robert Frost (1874–1963) I see this poem as one that is very good, but could be outstanding.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 5:38 PM
thanks for visiting, Richard, and for your analytical comments. I'd never read that Frost quote, but it makes sense. Appreciate the input; enjoy your evening, Sara
Springs Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 8:11 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry. This makes me want to come to Texas though to see a prairie.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 5:37 PM
thanks for visiting, Annabel! Glad you liked my poem and that it created a desire to visit Texas. It's truly an unusual state, wishing you pleasant evening, Sara
Baker Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 9:05 PM
And brilliant my sweet poet. I love reading your poet, Sara. Hugs, Bill
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 5:36 PM
thank you, hubby! You're the best. hugs, me.
Fleming Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 6:32 AM
We don't have those enormous wide open spaces with their vast skies in the UK that you lucky Texans have...but we do still have the Moorlands. I understand exactly what you feel. Love your poem. :) john
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 5:11 PM
thanks for visiting, John. Yes, we Texans are lucky as are you with the Moorlands...glad you can identify with the words, have a great evening :-) sara
Goldsmith Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 12:20 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write/story. Great Picture... Have a wonderful day writing away...........
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 4:57 PM
thanks, Paula, for visiting and for commenting. have a pleasant week ahead
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 4:31 AM
So nice read! "the air, thick with the scent of sage" wonderful line! A favorite.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 4:57 PM
awww, thank you for your encouraging words and for the fav. Color me grateful
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