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Spring Haiku

Spring

spring's divine gifts sing

notes composing spirits high ... 

Florida is mute

creationearthnatureseasonssenseshaiku

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/2/2025 10:08:00 PM

I missed this one. Congrats for high placement. Unfortunately I know next to nothing about Florida and the rest of USA. Is Florida that bad Poetry Hugs.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2025 7:48:00 PM

I thinks yours had the best twist of them all. Congrats on number One win, Caycay

Paige Hind

Date: 4/21/2025 9:06:00 PM

Lovely -

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/9/2025 2:59:00 AM

"florida is mute" - Owing to the thrill-filled arrival of the spring? Congratulations!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 4/7/2025 8:29:00 PM

your beauty of words makes one think of florida more! lovely write dear friend. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2025 10:42:00 AM

Back with congrats. Yours is one of the few with that wonderful haiku twist at the end.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2025 10:07:00 AM

- Congratulations on your spring haiku, CayCay :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/6/2025 7:54:00 AM

Congratulations CayCay! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/6/2025 7:37:00 AM

CayCay, a wonderful and creative spring haiku. Florida may have a one day spring but nothing like the contrast of winter to spring in the Northeast. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/4/2025 11:31:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your "spring" Haiku write. How I wish I was with you and taking a walk on the beach. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away............

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/4/2025 11:35:00 AM

That would be nice, I'd enjoy it. I don't know where you live, but come on by any time, the beach will be here. CayCay

Valsa George

Date: 4/3/2025 4:00:00 AM

Florida with tropical climate does not show special signs of spring compared to places where winter is quite prominent. In such places 'springs divine gifts sing' . Beautifully written haiku, dear Cay.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/3/2025 2:29:00 AM

Florida is mute made me pause and think its very quiet there right now! Or maybe spring is arriving a bit late? As no birds seems to sing? How beautiful is your spring haiku! Flows so well too! Must be gorgeous weather there right now with all spring blooms dressing the trees! And bird songs! Pleasure reading your haiku! Best wishes

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/3/2025 7:08:00 AM

To me, Florida's spring is a non-event. Compared to American States that bloom glorious, lush, enchanting growth, I'm not really Spring-moved. Even barren Texas gives one BlueBonnets to ew and ah about. HOWEVER, Florida has a tropical beauty that I quite embrace and many other sense-gifts (YES, many exotic birds.) Thanks for visiting. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Karen Jones

Date: 4/3/2025 1:14:00 AM

lol love the first line’s melody and the punchline of the last one!

Reya Suri

Date: 4/2/2025 8:41:00 PM

The ending made me chuckle. Even here, it seems like winter some days but summer the next.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/2/2025 5:38:00 PM

A stunner, CayCay, esp. for those who regard Florida as 'Paradise Regained.'

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/2/2025 7:23:00 PM

It's where I have lived since 2020. Paridise regained / Lizards Regained (lived here before.) I DO NOT miss winter, but I do crave fall and spring at times. CayCay

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/1/2025 8:56:00 AM

Dear CayCay, what a gentle breeze of beauty, capturing the essence of renewal and serenity. The contrast between the "spring gifts" and the muted "Florida" creates quite a reflection on the season's presence and absence. I use to live in Florida. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniek

Michael Tor

Date: 4/1/2025 1:46:00 AM

Love your ending Cay Cay so true you are. Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2025 10:14:00 PM

Cool kicker at the end, Caycay. I hope you are still having a great time.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/31/2025 9:24:00 PM

i had my fill of florida years back, cay...yes, must be scorching over there although your ku is definitely divine! huggs

Tom Woody

Date: 3/31/2025 1:21:00 PM

I'm in Florida now. Gonna be one hot week! Heading home to Ohio soon

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/31/2025 1:48:00 PM

In Ohio, you'll see Spring's beauty. I'm in Virginia, due to drive home to Florida where Spring isn't a splendor thing ... Thanks for reading and safe travels ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/31/2025 1:06:00 PM

- Lovely spring haiku, CayCay :) - hugs

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/31/2025 1:50:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I do miss Spring as I've lifelong experienced it. It just isn't the same in Florida. Upside, love being minutes from the Atlantic and not experiencing winter anymore ... CayCay

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