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Raindrops On Roses

Raindrops on roses last night,
what a storm it blew.
My garden got a great bath,
looking clean and new.
Roses wanting sun,
their faces are shining up.
Rose garden is done.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/29/2025 11:17:00 AM

"4 Place" Raindrops On Roses ~Date Writtne:8/15/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet ~~~~ FAVORITE THINGS Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud ~~~~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2025 10:27:00 AM

- Back to congratulate you on your win in the contest, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/29/2025 11:33:00 AM

Thank You for visiting, for your comment and for your Congratulate. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops On Roses" write. Thanks for coming back again. Always great to see you here. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Hugs... Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 8/19/2025 2:59:00 AM

Lovely penning Paula, such a lovely fragrant piece on roses which are always such a fragrant flower. Have a lovely day, Gordon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2025 8:44:00 AM

Thank You for visiting and for your comment. Always good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops On Roses" write. I love roses, pink ones the best. Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2025 9:23:00 PM

Oh I did see this. I was thinking you meant you also wrote on the geese

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/18/2025 12:57:00 PM

Thank You for visiting and for your comment again. Always good to see you. No geese here just wet roses. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops On Roses" write again. Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/17/2025 1:02:00 PM

May rain and roses forever listen, to the human's heart's fondness, for blossom and glisten. Lovely read my friend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/18/2025 12:53:00 PM

Thank You for visiting and for your comment. Glad you found my "Raindrops On Roses" to be a, Lovely read. No garden here. Wish I had pink roses. The rain last week was great. I enjoyed writing this one. Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/17/2025 11:28:00 AM

Paula, this is a lovely, appealing poem. Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2025 12:19:00 PM

Thank You for visiting and for your comment. Glad you found my "Raindrops On Roses" to be, lovely, appealing poem. No garden here. Wish I had pink roses but toooooo hot. I enjoyed writing this one. Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/17/2025 2:36:00 AM

Oh how I love your garden filled with roses and your beautiful heart Paula, be well and keep gardening. Its one of the most precious joys in life. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2025 12:17:00 PM

Thank You for visiting and for your comment. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops On Roses" write. It has been very hot and dry. Rain this week made me write this. Flowers are beautiful after a rain with their bath/drink. No garden here but in other yards. Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/16/2025 6:34:00 PM

I love this, Paula! Flowers are so beautiful after rain. My garden got a shower today. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2025 12:15:00 PM

Thank You for visiting and for your comment. Glad you love my "Raindrops On Roses" write. It has been very hot and dry. Rain this week made me write this one. Yes, flowers are so beautiful after rain with their bath and drink. No garden here but in other yards. Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/16/2025 3:22:00 PM

I'll be sorry to see the roses go. Thank you for this uplifting poem.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2025 12:12:00 PM

Thank You for visiting and for your comment. Glad you found my "Raindrops On Roses" to be an, uplifting poem. No garden or roses here. I do love pink roses the best. Wish I had some but hard to grow here. Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2025 1:23:00 PM

Lovely. So sweet, Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2025 12:10:00 PM

Thank You for visiting and for your comment. Glad you found my "Raindrops On Roses" to be, Lovely. So sweet. No garden here. I enjoyed writing this one. Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/16/2025 1:43:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Paula :) - (I found this difficult, but enjoyed the challenge :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2025 10:41:00 AM

Thank You for visiting and for your comment. Also thanks for your, Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my "Raindrops On Roses" to be, A lovely poem. It has been a hot and dry summer. No garden here. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a great weekend with Hugs. Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Bill Baker

Date: 8/15/2025 10:35:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Paula, those flowers do love a nice rain bath. Blessings, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2025 10:38:00 AM

Thank You for visiting and for your comment. Glad you found my "Raindrops On Roses" to have, Lovely imagery. It has been a hot and dry summer. The much needed rain came this week and gave everything a much needed bath and drink. No garden here. Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Valsa George

Date: 8/15/2025 9:09:00 PM

Paula, I can visualize your garden with roses, all washed clean by the rain.Here in my place, it rains cats and dogs, these days. This is the season when roses bloom in bunches. Unfortunately all my roses are drooping down with the weight of rain drops. A lovely poem. All the best dear friend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2025 10:34:00 AM

Thank You for visiting and for your comment. Glad you found my "Raindrops On Roses" to be, A lovely poem. It has been a hot and dry summer. Send some rain over here. Hahaha!!! No garden here. I love pink roses the best. It was fun to write. Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/15/2025 5:30:00 PM

beautifully done, Paula. You captured the beautiful but fragile nature of flowers. Ours are barely surviving the heat. Anyway, best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2025 10:31:00 AM

Thank You for visiting and for your comment. Also thanks for your, best wishes with the contest. Glad you found my "Raindrops On Roses" write to be, beautifully done. It has been a hot and dry summer. No garden here. I enjoyed writing this one. Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/15/2025 1:20:00 PM

Dear Paula, I think it feels like a little morning stroll after the rain with fresh air, wet petals, and that softness in the world after a storm. I could almost smell the roses just reading it. I love how you make the rain feel like a gift instead of a bother a free bath for the garden, leaving everything “clean and new.” Blessings, My Dear Paula, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2025 10:27:00 AM

Thank You for visiting and for your comment. Glad you enjoyed my "Raindrops On Roses" write and you could almost smell the roses. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. It has been a hot and dry summer. It rained at night and the next day I wrote this. No garden here. Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/15/2025 12:15:00 PM

What a charming and uplifting piece of writing! The blooms, anew, received their tender draught, a soft embrace of the earth's bounty.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2025 10:19:00 AM

Thank You for visiting and for your comment. Glad you found my "Raindrops On Roses" to be, a charming and uplifting piece of writing. No garden here. I love pink roses the best. It was fun to write. Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/15/2025 12:06:00 PM

Such a pretty, uplifting write! The roses had their bath and drink :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2025 10:17:00 AM

Thank You for visiting and for your comment. Glad you found my "Raindrops On Roses" to be, a pretty, uplifting write. No garden here but I love pink roses. Hope you can enjoy some Roses as you write away...........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/15/2025 10:59:00 AM

Raindrops On Roses ~Date Writtne:8/15/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet ~~~~ FAVORITE THINGS Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud ~~~~