Home » Poems » Paula Goldsmith » DANCING IN THE RAIN

DANCING IN THE RAIN

Loud thunder,
coming from down under.
Rain coming down,
dancing in the rain like a clown,
in my ballgown.

dancefungigglehumorrainother

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Valsa George

Date: 7/4/2025 10:28:00 PM

A fun read- the reflection of your ebullient spirit. It is thrilling to dance in the rain. All the Best, dear Paula !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2025 10:12:00 AM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Also Thank You for your, All the Best. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It was fun to write. Yes, it is thrilling to dance in the rain like a kid again. Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away............

Karen Jones

Date: 6/29/2025 1:53:00 PM

Love the fun imagery! Congratulations on your win!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/1/2025 9:31:00 AM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Also Thank You for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It was fun to write. We need rain. Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2025 12:27:00 PM

oh I remember how much I liked this one. big congrats, paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/1/2025 9:30:00 AM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Also Thank You for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write again. It was great to see you back here. Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/29/2025 9:28:00 AM

"5 Place" DANCING IN THE RAIN ~ Date Written:6/26/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet ~~~ WHAT THE WORLD LOVES Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

Crystol Woods

Date: 6/29/2025 6:50:00 AM

What perfectly sharp images you've provoked! Congratulations!! Xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/29/2025 9:28:00 AM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Also Thank You for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It was fun to write. Hot and dry here. We need rain. Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............

Len Gasun

Date: 6/28/2025 6:47:00 PM

Coming back to enjoy again this fantastic poem of yours and to congratulate you dear. Congratulations on your win! Hugs and cheers!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/29/2025 9:25:00 AM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Also Thank You for coming back with your Congratulations on my win. It is always great to see you here. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write again. Hugs... Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............

Len Gasun

Date: 6/28/2025 3:34:00 AM

A beautiful and delightful poem, dancing in the rain my dear poet friend. I can imagine you in your ballgown, you look pretty for sure not a clown :) Enjoying another gem from you while waiting for the rain here to stop. Thanks a lot. Good luck always. Hugs, hugs

Len Gasun
Date: 6/28/2025 6:46:00 PM

I'll be glad to join you my dearest poet friend Paula. Rain is more a blessings for us all.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2025 1:58:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Also thanks for your, Good luck always. Glad you enjoyed my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. Very Dry Here. We need rain so everything can get a bath and drink. (Animals, trees, plants.) I would dance outside in a ballgown or as a clown if it would rain. Hahaha!!! Hugs... Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/27/2025 12:26:00 PM

I am sure you look lovely in your ballgown not like a clown at all !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2025 1:55:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It Is Very Dry Here. We need a big thunder shower to give everything a bath and drink. (Animals, trees, plants.) I would dance outside in a ballgown or as a clown if it would rain. Hahaha!!! Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............

Hiya Sharma

Date: 6/26/2025 11:35:00 PM

Oh what a delightful poem this is, sweet Paula! You've brought this theme to life and painted a beautiful imagery within such few words... dancing away freely in the rosy fragrance of rain! Enjoying the moments! It's absolutely a treasure.. thought I find thunderstorms to be quite melancholic, haha. Well done for the contest! Sending you many best wishes and light always, dear poetess :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2025 1:53:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Also thanks for your, many best wishes and light always. Glad you found my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" to be, a delightful poem. Very Dry Here... I love the rain even thunderstorms. Guess I need to go out acting like a clown and see if I can get some rain here. Hahaha!!! Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2025 9:02:00 PM

You did a splendid job with that theme. So nice.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2025 1:24:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you found my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" to be, So nice. Guess my humor was on overdrive. Real Dry Here... We really need rain. Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/26/2025 8:12:00 PM

I'm thinking of Gene Kelly right away too, just like Terry Flood. See comment underneath mine... Splish-splash, what a bash. ~ Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2025 1:21:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It Is Real Dry Here. We need rain to give everything a bath and drink. (Animals, trees, plants.) Looks like I may need to go outside like a clown, dancing so we can get some rain. Hahaha!!! I am over due to hear the rain and go splashing in puddles. Splash ~ Splash.... Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............

Terry Flood

Date: 6/26/2025 3:36:00 PM

And when Gene Kelly, watching from a doorway, steps out with an umbrella, you tell him, “Get out of my moment!”. Go on, Paula… Splosh in that puddle… you know you want to ;-)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2025 1:18:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It Is Real Dry Here. We need rain to give everything a bath and drink. (Animals, trees, plants.) Looks like I may need to go outside like a clown, dancing so we can get some rain. Hahaha!!! I would love to hear the rain and splash in the puddles. Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............

Jan Allison

Date: 6/26/2025 2:48:00 PM

ah so you like doing a rain dance Paula lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2025 1:14:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It Is Real Dry Here. We need rain to give everything a bath and drink. (Animals, trees, plants.) Looks like I may need to go outside like a clown, dancing so we can get some rain. Hahaha!!! I love to hear the rain. Hugs... Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............

David Crandall

Date: 6/26/2025 2:34:00 PM

Sounds like a crazy fun thunder shower. We don't get too many of those out my way.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2025 1:08:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It Is Real Dry Here. We need a big thunder shower to give everything a bath and drink. (Animals, trees, plants.) Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/26/2025 1:42:00 PM

What a clown! Too funny!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2025 1:04:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you found my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" to be, Too funny. Guess my humor was on overdrive. Real Dry Here... I would go out acting like a clown if we could get some rain. Hahaha!!! Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away............

Joseph May

Date: 6/26/2025 1:21:00 PM

Enjoying the raindrops with a dance, Nicely expressed Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2025 1:00:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you found my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" to be, Nicely expressed. Real Dry Here... I would go out dancing in a ballgown if we could get some rain. I love the sound of the raindrops. Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/26/2025 1:00:00 PM

- A cheerful rain dance, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2025 12:58:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you found my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" to be, A cheerful rain dance. I would go out dancing in a ballgown if we could get some rain here. Real Dry... Hugs... Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/26/2025 11:33:00 AM

DANCING IN THE RAIN ~ Date Written:6/26/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet ~~~ WHAT THE WORLD LOVES Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud