DANCING IN THE RAIN

Loud thunder, coming from down under. Rain coming down, dancing in the rain like a clown, in my ballgown.
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George Avatar
July 4, 2025 at 10:28 PM
A fun read- the reflection of your ebullient spirit. It is thrilling to dance in the rain. All the Best, dear Paula !
Goldsmith Avatar
July 5, 2025 at 10:12 AM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Also Thank You for your, All the Best. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It was fun to write. Yes, it is thrilling to dance in the rain like a kid again. Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away............
Jones Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 1:53 PM
Love the fun imagery! Congratulations on your win!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 9:31 AM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Also Thank You for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It was fun to write. We need rain. Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away............
Dietrich Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 12:27 PM
oh I remember how much I liked this one. big congrats, paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 9:30 AM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Also Thank You for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write again. It was great to see you back here. Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............
Goldsmith Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 9:28 AM
"5 Place" DANCING IN THE RAIN ~ Date Written:6/26/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet ~~~ WHAT THE WORLD LOVES Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud
Woods Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 6:50 AM
What perfectly sharp images you've provoked! Congratulations!! Xo
Goldsmith Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 9:28 AM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Also Thank You for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It was fun to write. Hot and dry here. We need rain. Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............
Gasun Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 6:47 PM
Coming back to enjoy again this fantastic poem of yours and to congratulate you dear. Congratulations on your win! Hugs and cheers!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 9:25 AM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Also Thank You for coming back with your Congratulations on my win. It is always great to see you here. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write again. Hugs... Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............
Gasun Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 3:34 AM
A beautiful and delightful poem, dancing in the rain my dear poet friend. I can imagine you in your ballgown, you look pretty for sure not a clown :) Enjoying another gem from you while waiting for the rain here to stop. Thanks a lot. Good luck always. Hugs, hugs
Gasun Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 6:46 PM
I'll be glad to join you my dearest poet friend Paula. Rain is more a blessings for us all.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 1:58 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Also thanks for your, Good luck always. Glad you enjoyed my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. Very Dry Here. We need rain so everything can get a bath and drink. (Animals, trees, plants.) I would dance outside in a ballgown or as a clown if it would rain. Hahaha!!! Hugs... Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............
Rose  Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 12:26 PM
I am sure you look lovely in your ballgown not like a clown at all !
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 1:55 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It Is Very Dry Here. We need a big thunder shower to give everything a bath and drink. (Animals, trees, plants.) I would dance outside in a ballgown or as a clown if it would rain. Hahaha!!! Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............
Sharma  Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 11:35 PM
Oh what a delightful poem this is, sweet Paula! You've brought this theme to life and painted a beautiful imagery within such few words... dancing away freely in the rosy fragrance of rain! Enjoying the moments! It's absolutely a treasure.. thought I find thunderstorms to be quite melancholic, haha. Well done for the contest! Sending you many best wishes and light always, dear poetess :)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 1:53 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Also thanks for your, many best wishes and light always. Glad you found my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" to be, a delightful poem. Very Dry Here... I love the rain even thunderstorms. Guess I need to go out acting like a clown and see if I can get some rain here. Hahaha!!! Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 9:02 PM
You did a splendid job with that theme. So nice.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 1:24 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you found my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" to be, So nice. Guess my humor was on overdrive. Real Dry Here... We really need rain. Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............
Wolf Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 8:12 PM
I'm thinking of Gene Kelly right away too, just like Terry Flood. See comment underneath mine... Splish-splash, what a bash. ~ Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 1:21 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It Is Real Dry Here. We need rain to give everything a bath and drink. (Animals, trees, plants.) Looks like I may need to go outside like a clown, dancing so we can get some rain. Hahaha!!! I am over due to hear the rain and go splashing in puddles. Splash ~ Splash.... Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............
Flood Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 3:36 PM
And when Gene Kelly, watching from a doorway, steps out with an umbrella, you tell him, “Get out of my moment!”. Go on, Paula… Splosh in that puddle… you know you want to ;-)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 1:18 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It Is Real Dry Here. We need rain to give everything a bath and drink. (Animals, trees, plants.) Looks like I may need to go outside like a clown, dancing so we can get some rain. Hahaha!!! I would love to hear the rain and splash in the puddles. Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............
Allison Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 2:48 PM
ah so you like doing a rain dance Paula lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 1:14 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It Is Real Dry Here. We need rain to give everything a bath and drink. (Animals, trees, plants.) Looks like I may need to go outside like a clown, dancing so we can get some rain. Hahaha!!! I love to hear the rain. Hugs... Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............
Crandall Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 2:34 PM
Sounds like a crazy fun thunder shower. We don't get too many of those out my way.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 1:08 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you enjoyed my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" write. It Is Real Dry Here. We need a big thunder shower to give everything a bath and drink. (Animals, trees, plants.) Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............
Rodrigues Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 1:42 PM
What a clown! Too funny!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 1:04 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you found my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" to be, Too funny. Guess my humor was on overdrive. Real Dry Here... I would go out acting like a clown if we could get some rain. Hahaha!!! Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away............
May Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 1:21 PM
Enjoying the raindrops with a dance, Nicely expressed Paula
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 1:00 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you found my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" to be, Nicely expressed. Real Dry Here... I would go out dancing in a ballgown if we could get some rain. I love the sound of the raindrops. Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............
Andresen Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 1:00 PM
- A cheerful rain dance, Paula :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 12:58 PM
Thank You for reading, writing and your support. Glad you found my fun "DANCING IN THE RAIN" to be, A cheerful rain dance. I would go out dancing in a ballgown if we could get some rain here. Real Dry... Hugs... Let's go dancing in the rain and then go writing away.............
Goldsmith Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 11:33 AM
DANCING IN THE RAIN ~ Date Written:6/26/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet ~~~ WHAT THE WORLD LOVES Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud
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