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Clouds Talking To Me

"Pretty clouds filled with water, then it rains down." By Poet

I love to sit and watch the clouds,
as they dance across the big blue sky.
If I watch and wait what will I see,
animals like a zoo walking by.
One day I ask a big bright white cloud,
where are you going?
I was shocked when it answered back,
off to play it replied to me.
I did not know clouds could talk,
then I heard back-as a rule we don't.
I asked-how can pretty clouds rain down?
We get sad from traveling over the world,
when we have had enough then we rain tears down.

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Bj Legros Kelley Date: 5/17/2025 3:33:00 PM Oh, this is sweet Paula! You have such a vivid imagination and artful way of writing! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/18/2025 1:31:00 PM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write and for your kind words. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" write to be, Oh, this is sweet. My imagination took off running on writing this one. Sometimes it can Not be stopped. Hahaha!!! Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Crystol Woods Date: 4/28/2025 2:11:00 PM Awe such a sweet poem...a bit sad but also fun thinking of clouds playing! Xo Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/29/2025 10:14:00 AM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" write to be, such a sweet poem. My imagination took off on this write. Oh yes, clouds are playing. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 4/27/2025 2:50:00 PM I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who talks to clouds lol, been doing that since I was very little Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/28/2025 8:57:00 AM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "Clouds Talking To Me" write. I like to talk to the clouds as they go by. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Hilda Greenhough Date: 4/26/2025 4:24:00 PM This is great personification. Your imagination is excellent. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/27/2025 10:56:00 AM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Also thanks for your, All the Best. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" write to be a, great personification. My imagination was working overtime on this fun write. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Reason A. Poteet Date: 4/26/2025 4:00:00 PM Used to lie in the grass and talk to the clouds or with my sister about their formations. Now I sit in my swing and look for shapes of animals, people, objects... A beautiful piece, Paula. I enjoyed the sparks you inspired in my past. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/27/2025 10:54:00 AM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Also thanks for your, All the Best. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" write to be, A beautiful piece. It was fun to write. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Michael Tor Date: 4/25/2025 9:58:00 AM Paula congratulations on your winning clouds. My mom wrote her son's a letter and hid it and found it after she passed. She said when we look up in the sky and we see the clouds it is her smiling down on us. Your cloud poem made me think of those words she wrote for us. Thank you Dear Paula for sharing I have been busy with my brother's house and haven't been on the Soup. Hugs... Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/25/2025 2:00:00 PM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "Clouds Talking To Me" write. I like what your mom said about the clouds. I have missed you here but your brother's house is more important. There must be a poem or two here. Hugs... Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Valsa George Date: 4/24/2025 8:16:00 PM Back to your poem with Congratulations on your great win, Paula. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/25/2025 1:56:00 PM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Clouds Talking To Me" write again. It is great to see you back. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/24/2025 6:29:00 PM "2 Place" Clouds Talking To Me~Date Written:4/20/2025~Written By Human Poet..... Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 4/24/2025 4:30:00 AM Such beautiful thoughts about clouds! I like the comparison of clouds in the sky with animals in a zoo. Very fertile is your imagination on clouds. All the Best dear Paula. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/24/2025 6:45:00 PM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Also thanks for your, All the Best. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" write to be, Very fertile is your imagination on clouds. My imagination was working overtime on this fun write. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Beryl Edmonds Date: 4/23/2025 5:42:00 PM That’s so nice Paula, I love to watch clouds passing by, and the pictures they paint are amazing…. Beryl Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/24/2025 6:35:00 PM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" to be, so nice. Watching the clouds dance by is so much fun. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away.............

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/22/2025 8:52:00 PM Loved the personification of the wandering cloud and the surprise of it talking. There are Q and A! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/23/2025 3:18:00 PM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Clouds Talking To Me" write. It was so much fun to bring to life. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/22/2025 4:44:00 PM Creative and descriptive lines penned in this one. Thank you for sharing it with us, Paula. I enjoyed reading it. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/23/2025 3:15:00 PM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" to be, Creative and descriptive. Also glad you enjoyed reading it. I love it when my readers enjoy reading my work. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/22/2025 12:23:00 PM that's super creative and lovely, Paula. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/23/2025 3:12:00 PM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" to be, super creative and lovely. My imagination was working overtime on this fun write. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Sotto Poet Date: 4/22/2025 10:57:00 AM Impressive, Paula; clouds seem to speak an accent that all humans recognize. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/23/2025 3:09:00 PM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" to be, Impressive. Yes, clouds do speak to us in their many shapes. Some real life like. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Krish Radhakrishna Date: 4/22/2025 10:56:00 AM Very nice Paula, particularly clouds marching like animals in a zoo. Great imagination! All the best in the contest! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/23/2025 3:07:00 PM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read and write. Also for your All the best in the contest. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" to be, Very nice. It was fun to bring to life. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

David Kavanagh Date: 4/22/2025 9:58:00 AM Cloud’s have a way of communicating with us Paula through a universal language, I prefer flying over them myself, especially when you know it’s hammering down underneath lol! A dreamy one for sure, cheers David Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/23/2025 3:05:00 PM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" to be, A dreamy one for sure. I also like to fly above the clouds and in them. I have taken some real nice pictures. I love cloud watching. Cheers to you... Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Shadow Hamilton Date: 4/22/2025 9:39:00 AM this is stunning Paula so glad to read it clouds are fascinating you can see so much in their shapes hugs Shadow Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/23/2025 3:02:00 PM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" to be, stunning. Oh yes, cloud watching can be so much fun. I enjoyed writing this one. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Reya Suri Date: 4/21/2025 10:41:00 PM This feels surreal! I indeed love watching the sky too; however, if a cloud told me that it rained when it got tired of traveling the world, I would probably think I was schizophrenic. Haha, I might be taking this too literally... regardless, a beautiful piece. Have a great day, dear poet :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/22/2025 8:47:00 AM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" to be, a beautiful piece. Oh yes, cloud watching can be so much fun. I love to find animals or angels. My imagination was working overtime on this fun write. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Gershon Wolf Date: 4/21/2025 7:21:00 PM I think I talked to that very cloud the last four days or so. ~ Rainy Chicago Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 4/22/2025 5:45:00 PM First I started talking to myself... Now I talk to clouds... Senility strikes again... ~ Wishitweren'tme Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/22/2025 8:43:00 AM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Clouds Talking To Me" write. Rain does make the clouds look sad. Talk to them to cheer them up. The bright sun will come back out and make them look happy again. We need rain, send some my way. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 4/21/2025 11:39:00 AM Hello Paula, oh what a lovely poem. You are a cloud watcher to. You never know what the clouds will show us. enjoy your dqay my friend. /Darlene Hugs. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 4/22/2025 10:04:00 AM Hello Paula, I always see different shape in the clouds. Before my eyes the clouds change shapes. i see animals , hearts, faces, heads on pillows, angels. Hugs. /Darlene/ Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/22/2025 8:40:00 AM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" to be, a lovely poem. Oh yes, cloud watching can be so much fun. I love to find animals or angels. Hugs... Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Joe Dimino Date: 4/21/2025 8:23:00 AM We need all to hug a cloud today -- if none around, enjoy the blue~ tomorrow will do. Very inventive write. Great imagery! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/21/2025 11:15:00 AM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" to be a, Very inventive write. Great imagery. Oh yes, hug a cloud today. The bright blue sky needs a hug from time to time. Hahaha!!!. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Paul Bell Date: 4/21/2025 5:31:00 AM Clouds always seem to be sad when I'm putting up my deck chair. Raining now. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/21/2025 11:12:00 AM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Clouds Talking To Me" write. Raining does make the clouds look sad. The bright sun will make them look happy again. Do you look for shapes in them??? I love to find animals. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/21/2025 3:10:00 AM - Creative and imaginative poem, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/21/2025 11:10:00 AM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Also thanks for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" write to be a, Creative and imaginative poem. It was a joy to write this fun poem. Hugs.... Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Victor Buhagiar Date: 4/21/2025 1:51:00 AM Great poem. A lesson we should all learn. No wonder clouds are sad. This world is mainly evil. Loved your poem. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/21/2025 11:08:00 AM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Glad you found my "Clouds Talking To Me" write to be a, Great poem. I wish the world was a happier place for all. So much pain/evil.... Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away..............

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/20/2025 12:51:00 PM Clouds Talking To Me~Date Written:4/20/2025~Written By Human Poet..... Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/21/2025 11:00:00 AM Great to see you here. Thank You for stopping to read/write. Also thanks for you kind words. Glad you enjoyed my "Clouds Talking To Me" write. It was so much fun to write. Enjoy your blessed/fun day talking to the clouds as you write away.............. Mystic Rose Rose Date: 4/20/2025 6:42:00 PM You are such a creative human being Paula and your poetry only reflects that even more.