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At Least One Screw Loose

George was a prankster, at least one screw loose Peed in a bottle, tagged it orange juice His mom drank it all down Then she started to frown Her face turned red, then white ~ then chartreuse

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Date: 7/29/2025 7:47:00 PM
Thought of an alternative for your last line ~ Face turned a lovely shade of chartreuse
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/29/2025 8:04:00 PM
Good suggestion, Line. Thanks. ~ gw
Date: 7/28/2025 5:21:00 AM
Haha, Gershon never holds back! That last line totally got me—chartreuse is the perfect twist. Poor mom, but also… George, really?!
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Date: 7/26/2025 3:53:00 PM
gr…ossss! LOL
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Date: 7/26/2025 11:20:00 AM
Great limerick. You've got the beat of it too.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/29/2025 8:06:00 PM
Just like Michael Jackson... I can 'Beat it' too. lol.
Date: 7/25/2025 6:07:00 PM
Eeeewe, that was not nice, but a good Limerick. BB
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Date: 7/25/2025 4:50:00 PM
EEEEW! clever, though.
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Date: 7/25/2025 12:20:00 PM
wow! Thanks for Sharing!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/29/2025 8:05:00 PM
Wowie-zowie, Brenda.

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