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Any Small Town

Before I understood how life 
was a weave of intricacies
My town was a wonderful world 
to serve my childish fantasies. 

I was a young and healthy lad
a source of mother’s pride and joy 
with sun bleached hair and sky-blue eyes.
just your average wide-eyed boy 

On summer days I could run free 
over hills and through fields of grain 
played outside in times of sunshine
and inside whenever it rained

I loved to hunt and fish the creek
played in the streets because I could 
In my naive idealism. 
the outside world was kind and good 

My world was from the northern hills
and south as far as I could see 
About twenty square miles of everything 
A curious boy wanted it to be

Right there smack dab in the middle of it
sat a little town they called Wakenda 
Just a few houses and a tiny store
the grandest place anyone ever saw

A place where fathers manicured their lawns 
and neighbors waved or greeted each other 
There was no need for privacy fences
People treated each other like brothers

Where the men drove away every morning 
to places that I did not know where
in my mind some place that was exotic
but I can’t say that I ever did care

Hard-working mothers stayed home all day long, 
cooked the breakfast, lunch, and dinner with ease 
hung their fresh washed laundry out on clothes lines 
and let our underwear swing in the breeze

We played kick the can right out in the street
Or chased lightning bugs out in the backyard
Hide and seek could cover a couple blocks
So could freeze tag or ghost in the graveyard

In that magical village where I lived
I knew everyone and they all knew me
Never a worry about anything
I was safe, loved, innocent and naive

But then, when I was nearly ten years old
It was the first time that I witnessed death
a boy, just a few years older than me 
an accident had stolen his last breath

His death was like a stone tossed from a hand
into the pool of my reality 
Its ripples spread out from my soul’s center
with each wave a truth was revealed to me. 

I could not view life through rose colored glass
the youthful playground was taken from me
My life had become very small and cramped 
just a shell of what it once used to be

I saw the evil that surrounds us all
hiding in the shadows just out of sight
The town I loved now had blurry edges
life decaying behind an opaque light

Still the same town with all the same people
living their lives as if nothing had changed
Why had they not noticed the dust and dirt
and just how life had been so rearranged

What had started as just tiny ripples 
had now turned themselves into foaming waves 
that smashed my innocents against the rocks
and helped to mold my adolescence days

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 9/13/2024 2:57:00 AM
My dear brother Jerry…l am so sorry l missed your POTD… life has been busy! Belated Congratulations my friend on POTD for this beautiful, heartfelt, engaging tale…..just loved it!! Debx
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Date: 8/18/2024 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD win. Sorry this is late, I took a couple of days off. What a wonderful write/story. Good memories are the best kind. Too bad about your friend. Life can hurt when one is young. Have a blessed day/week.....................
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 8/18/2024 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Paula.
Date: 8/18/2024 6:55:00 AM
Excellent story telling Jerry. I was captivated! Congratulations :)
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Date: 8/17/2024 7:57:00 AM
Great storytelling Jerry. "Any" small town is correct. Mine was similar to yours and, of course, the anonymity was abundant. One can never go back to that innocence. Especially after a tragic event as you describe. Congratulations on POTD! :)
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 8/18/2024 6:30:00 AM
Thanks, Linda. I appreciate you dropping by.
Date: 8/16/2024 8:35:00 PM
Jerry, your childhood town and life was delightful and then tragedy touched your young heart and you were never the same, nothing was, I know that feeling too, congratulations on receiving the deserving POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
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Date: 8/16/2024 7:24:00 PM
Dear Jerry, it's wonderful remembering a time when days were kind and good. Our world has certainly changed. Beyond the constant negative that continues to circle, blessings truly surround us. Remember the good. Your thoughts touch my heart. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 8/16/2024 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Jerry. This was a great read.
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Date: 8/16/2024 12:25:00 PM
Small towns have problems too. Yet, I like the simplicity of small towns. Your poem brought the story to life. It was great writing. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 8/16/2024 11:02:00 AM
A great selection for POTD, Jerry. Brought back some pleasant memories for me.
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Date: 8/16/2024 10:56:00 AM
Hello Jerry Brotherton, Congratulations on yhou/r POTD. Enjoy your special day. I enjoyed to read this poem. Enjoy your day my fririend./Dxarlene/
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Date: 8/16/2024 10:29:00 AM
I had a feeling about this one, Jerry. Congrats to you on POTD!
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Date: 8/16/2024 7:05:00 AM
Excellent write! I know of living in a good and safe place. Things eventually shake us up and we must see what surrounds us. I look to God, who is our only hope. We know life should not be like this and yearn foe a good and safe place. Congrats on a much worthy POTD and a fave for me!!
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Date: 8/16/2024 4:19:00 AM
Dear Jerry, What a powerful read with such stark images from the innocence of childhood to the reality of life. You so deserve to be POTD. You captured me on every verse! CONGRATS!!! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/16/2024 4:08:00 AM
Hi Jerry: I enjoyed the description of your childhood way of life. Sounds a lot like mine was - but sadly that has all gone along with that age of innocence. We lived through the best times I think. Congratulations on. well deserved POTD. SuZ
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Date: 8/16/2024 1:52:00 AM
You are a great storyteller poet! Congratulations on your potd honor!
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Date: 8/16/2024 1:26:00 AM
Enjoyed this story/poem very much Jerry, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 8/16/2024 12:40:00 AM
Great storytelling Jerry, I enjoyed reading it , congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 8/15/2024 7:28:00 PM
Wow! What a great coming of age / loss of innocence narration, Jerry! Masterfully done, methinks. FAVE-time! Thank you, Gershon
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Date: 8/15/2024 12:35:00 PM
Great storytelling here Jerry.. An enjoyable read..
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Date: 8/15/2024 6:17:00 AM
What a powerful story told of an idyllic childhood impacted by a tragic event. I too grew up in a small village where everyone knew everyone else. Can't say it was idyllic but I do have my memories
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