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A Meadow’s Silent Song

Red dawn spreads above the range of hillocks.
A soft breeze scatters the dandelion seeds around.
A soft zephyr, clean and furry, flows like a hymn,
I feel elated, happy to be far from the city’s dust.

The meadow hums, a mild cacophony of sounds.
Bees hover over wild flowers that grow profusely
Beneath the two rows of rough stone walls.
As the sun rays rise up, and petals glow in such a grace.

Larks fly copiously here and there, sometimes resting
On a dark mulberry tree, so full of black berries
A delight for the birds that love the sweet fruit.
A delight for me since I too love the sweet mulberries.

So I sit down on a smooth stone, back to the wall.
I close my eyes just happy to hear nature’s song
No other being will disturb my profound meditation.
All around the meadow, silence reigns in peace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 8/21/2025 9:04:00 AM
What a sweet and vivid pastoral you paint Victorl Just lovely! :)
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Date: 8/9/2025 10:03:00 PM
Dear Victor, soothing, uplifting, and full of life! Your words transport me to a serene meadow, filled with the sweet scent of wildflowers and the joyous songs of larks. The way you weave together nature's beauty and your own sense of peace is truly captivating. Your love for the simple things in life shines through, and it's infectious. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem! Best, Anne
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Date: 8/9/2025 4:27:00 PM
Oh, Victor, Victor, my Victor, how can you ever doubt your poetry skills when you deliver master class writes such as this? BEAUTIFUL, absolutely and totally a poem to live inside of as it hypnotizes me to call me forth. GRAND writing. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 8/9/2025 3:55:00 PM
This is beautiful and peaceful. A fave for me :)
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Date: 8/9/2025 6:24:00 AM
This is such a peaceful and vivid scene! I love how you bring the meadow to life with gentle sounds and sights — the breeze, bees, larks, and even the mulberries. The way you describe sitting back and soaking in nature’s calm really makes me feel like I’m there, enjoying the quiet. It’s a beautiful moment of simple happiness and meditation.
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Date: 8/8/2025 6:52:00 PM
Such loveliness - red dawn, dandelion seeds; dark mulberry tree, so full of blackberries! Silence in the meadow so nice!
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Date: 8/8/2025 1:42:00 AM
How I wish to be in such a serene place where birds hover around the mulberry fruits and bees hum around wild flowers. It is so refreshing to be in a meadow, being away from the cacophony and dust of the city. There is an idyllic charm in your descriptions, dear Victor.
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Date: 8/8/2025 1:34:00 AM
Beautiful Victor! Hope you doing well!
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Date: 8/8/2025 12:48:00 AM
Your poem paints a sweet picture of bliss, dear Victor. I enjoyed visiting the scene immensely. Have a nice weekend. :)
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Date: 8/7/2025 4:56:00 PM
you've described such a heavenly place, Victor! Your imagery left me breathless. I especially liked the first first. wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 8/7/2025 2:20:00 PM
what a wonderful serene picture you paint Victor, the imagery is truly breathtaking! hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/7/2025 11:05:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "A Meadow’s Silent Song" write. Your words have painted a Pretty Picture. Great Ending... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.........
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Date: 8/7/2025 10:13:00 AM
Lovely and tranquil scene, Victor. well done
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Date: 8/7/2025 10:11:00 AM
Very nicely put, Victor; one with nature and its cacophony of scented rhythms and tantalizing colors. Have a wonderful day my friend.
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Date: 8/7/2025 8:40:00 AM
This reads very peaceful and serene Victor, just what we need today, thanks for this lovely poem,
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Date: 8/7/2025 4:21:00 AM
Yes, you have creative a very pleasant image in this one, Victor. It reads like a very lovely place to be. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 8/7/2025 3:47:00 AM
Dearest Victor, What a beautifully serene and vivid scene you’ve painted here! I could almost feel the soft breeze, hear the hum of bees, and taste those sweet mulberries. Hugs
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Date: 8/7/2025 3:38:00 AM
Your eloquent description of the transience of life and beauty is quite moving; your poem is lovely, Victor.
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Date: 8/7/2025 1:00:00 AM
- I can see this wonderful place ... listen with eyes closed and enjoy ... a beautiful poem, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 8/7/2025 12:24:00 AM
A lovely place to be Victor, it sounds alike heavenly peace, a beautiful poem… Beryl
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