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A Meadow’s Silent Song

Red dawn spreads above the range of hillocks.
A soft breeze scatters the dandelion seeds around.
A soft zephyr, clean and furry, flows like a hymn,
I feel elated, happy to be far from the city’s dust.

The meadow hums, a mild cacophony of sounds.
Bees hover over wild flowers that grow profusely
Beneath the two rows of rough stone walls.
As the sun rays rise up, and petals glow in such a grace.

Larks fly copiously here and there, sometimes resting
On a dark mulberry tree, so full of black berries
A delight for the birds that love the sweet fruit.
A delight for me since I too love the sweet mulberries.

So I sit down on a smooth stone, back to the wall.
I close my eyes just happy to hear nature’s song
No other being will disturb my profound meditation.
All around the meadow, silence reigns in peace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Fowler Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 9:04 AM
What a sweet and vivid pastoral you paint Victorl Just lovely! :)
Winter Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 10:03 PM
Dear Victor, soothing, uplifting, and full of life! Your words transport me to a serene meadow, filled with the sweet scent of wildflowers and the joyous songs of larks. The way you weave together nature's beauty and your own sense of peace is truly captivating. Your love for the simple things in life shines through, and it's infectious. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem! Best, Anne
Godwin Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 4:27 PM
Oh, Victor, Victor, my Victor, how can you ever doubt your poetry skills when you deliver master class writes such as this? BEAUTIFUL, absolutely and totally a poem to live inside of as it hypnotizes me to call me forth. GRAND writing. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Sands Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 3:55 PM
This is beautiful and peaceful. A fave for me :)
Velasco Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 6:24 AM
This is such a peaceful and vivid scene! I love how you bring the meadow to life with gentle sounds and sights — the breeze, bees, larks, and even the mulberries. The way you describe sitting back and soaking in nature’s calm really makes me feel like I’m there, enjoying the quiet. It’s a beautiful moment of simple happiness and meditation.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 6:52 PM
Such loveliness - red dawn, dandelion seeds; dark mulberry tree, so full of blackberries! Silence in the meadow so nice!
George Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 1:42 AM
How I wish to be in such a serene place where birds hover around the mulberry fruits and bees hum around wild flowers. It is so refreshing to be in a meadow, being away from the cacophony and dust of the city. There is an idyllic charm in your descriptions, dear Victor.
Vaso Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 1:34 AM
Beautiful Victor! Hope you doing well!
Buehler Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 12:48 AM
Your poem paints a sweet picture of bliss, dear Victor. I enjoyed visiting the scene immensely. Have a nice weekend. :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 4:56 PM
you've described such a heavenly place, Victor! Your imagery left me breathless. I especially liked the first first. wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 2:20 PM
what a wonderful serene picture you paint Victor, the imagery is truly breathtaking! hugs jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 11:05 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "A Meadow’s Silent Song" write. Your words have painted a Pretty Picture. Great Ending... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.........
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 10:13 AM
Lovely and tranquil scene, Victor. well done
DiMino Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 10:11 AM
Very nicely put, Victor; one with nature and its cacophony of scented rhythms and tantalizing colors. Have a wonderful day my friend.
Rose  Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 8:40 AM
This reads very peaceful and serene Victor, just what we need today, thanks for this lovely poem,
Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 4:21 AM
Yes, you have creative a very pleasant image in this one, Victor. It reads like a very lovely place to be. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
Williams Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 3:47 AM
Dearest Victor, What a beautifully serene and vivid scene you’ve painted here! I could almost feel the soft breeze, hear the hum of bees, and taste those sweet mulberries. Hugs
Poet Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 3:38 AM
Your eloquent description of the transience of life and beauty is quite moving; your poem is lovely, Victor.
Andresen Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 1:00 AM
- I can see this wonderful place ... listen with eyes closed and enjoy ... a beautiful poem, Victor :) - hugs
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August 7, 2025 at 12:24 AM
A lovely place to be Victor, it sounds alike heavenly peace, a beautiful poem… Beryl
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