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- Raindrops On Roses -

                                        With a lyrical refrain
                                        dripping shiny drops
                                      A refreshing gentle rain
                                      and fresh rosebud pops
                                         Silver pearls adorn
                                     Water will always pay gain
                                         - the beauty reborn

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Duke Beaufort Date: 8/20/2025 10:54:00 AM Anne-Lise, you're making me think of how lucky we are to live on a water planet. I suppose it's the primary reason we evolved in the first place. Your tribute to the power of water is breathtakingly refreshing!! Smiles!! Login to Reply

Ann Peck Date: 8/19/2025 9:16:00 AM This is so lovely and full of uplifting-ness (I couldn't think of the right word :) Anyhow, I think it's also an encouraging one: rose will bloom after rain falls, again and again, life will continue... Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 8/17/2025 2:03:00 PM The soft cadence of raindrops whispers in the air, Anne-lise! What a gentle thought, and the image too, quite charming and calming in its verse. I found delight. Login to Reply

Marilene Evans Date: 8/16/2025 4:55:00 PM Beautiful imagery ... dripping shiny drops ... silver pearls adorn ... Hugs, M. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/16/2025 10:45:00 AM WOW!!! What a beautiful write and rose picture. "Good Luck" Thanks for reading about my Rose. Hugs... Have a lovely day/weekend writing away................. Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 8/16/2025 5:00:00 AM Nature nurtures, all her own, a lesson to meditate on. Delightful. Totally refreshing write. Who will not be charmed be the elegance of a Rose? Beautiful. Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 8/16/2025 2:50:00 AM I can hear the refrain of dripping raindrops. Here too, it is raining and my rose bunches are drooping down with the weight of raindrops. A very lovely and soothing poem, dear Anne. All the Best. Hugs Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 8/15/2025 11:02:00 PM Pleasant imagery of the rain. The picture of the rose, an added blessing, Anne-Lise. Have a lovely weekend, my friend. Bill Login to Reply

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh Date: 8/15/2025 8:20:00 PM Well done.Wish you the best in the contest. Login to Reply

Deb M Date: 8/15/2025 8:19:00 PM Sunshine....your pretty title drew me in to this gorgeous little poem....love it! Debx Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/15/2025 6:00:00 PM Love that opening line! Login to Reply

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 8/15/2025 5:31:00 PM soft imagery and an engaging poem. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/15/2025 4:40:00 PM I really like this one with its lyrical quality. The snapshot to go along is fantastic. Thanks for sharing. It reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 8/15/2025 3:21:00 PM Anne-Lise, a lovely poem, best of luck in the contest, hugs, Constance Login to Reply