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Crystol Woods 1st Poetry Soup Contest:

Fair and Square Humorous Patter Sayings Poetry Contest

We’ll Ride a Horse Down Rocky Path We’ll ride a horse down rocky path Fall in love in the aftermath Well do-si-do and do it right Me and honey can dance all night Roll away to a half sashay ‘neath the moon’s where we’re apt to stay We promenade around fig leaves with rolled up jeans and shorter sleeves Hanging out in the doghouse tree I circle left and she don’t leave me Promenade with a giddyup Be home in time for kiss-make-up. Allemande left as we make things right. all things beautiful, all things bright. Weave the ring, a forever link All ‘lone till life turns blue and pink

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 5/20/2024 11:12:00 AM

Excellent Kim! I've had experience with this type of dance...love the freshness and your take on the contest! GL! :)

Suzette Richards

Date: 5/18/2024 9:05:00 AM

You have got the hang of it, Kim. Enjoyed :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/19/2024 4:06:00 PM

Thank you! I appreciate!

Paige Hind

Date: 5/13/2024 10:37:00 AM

Cute and clever- rhyme flowed great too

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2024 2:59:00 PM

Thank you, Paige! :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/13/2024 9:18:00 AM

Dear Kim, What a delightful blend of humor and romance—the whimsical imagery and rhythmic flow transport me to a world of love and laughter. I loved your playful use of language and clever wordplay, which make this poem a joy to read. It's a testament to your creativity and skill as a poet. Good Luck! - Blessings, my friend, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2024 10:21:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel! I had fun writing it. Had to do a bit of research. :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/13/2024 6:36:00 AM

Awesome, awesome! I felt like getting up and dancing but I can’t do that anymore after I broke my thigh For someone who loves dancing like I do?li..a great bummer.I think I should try the lyrics style. FAV Pangie Romios

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2024 7:06:00 AM

Thank you so much, Pangie xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/13/2024 6:28:00 AM

Fabulous tone and flow, Kim--much enjoyed the exuberance of your poem, my friend.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2024 7:07:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay Hugs~Kim

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/13/2024 1:34:00 AM

I remember many songs with square dancing like Oh Susanna, The Yellow Rose of Texas etc. An excellent poem. Great flow and fine rhymes. Best for a win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2024 7:07:00 AM

Thank you, Victor! Hugs ~ Kim

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/12/2024 7:54:00 PM

Kim, this is EXCELLENT~~creative and entertaining. Janice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2024 7:07:00 AM

Thank you, Janice! Hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/12/2024 4:24:00 PM

You wowed me with your entry into the contest. Nice use of square dance terms in lines and verses that easily flowed. Best wishes with the contest. Enjoy your week ahead, hugs, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2024 4:59:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Sara! Glad you liked it! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/12/2024 3:14:00 PM

you must be a square dancer to have done this so brilliantly Kim, I do swing dancing but just wouldnt know where to start with this theme! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2024 5:02:00 PM

Did some research. I had a little experience in school. :)