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Crystol Woods 1st Poetry Soup Contest:

Fair and Square Humorous Patter Sayings Poetry Contest

WE LL RIDE A HORSE DOWN ROCKY PATH

We’ll Ride a Horse Down Rocky Path

We’ll ride a horse down rocky path
Fall in love in the aftermath
Well do-si-do and do it right
Me and honey can dance all night

Roll away to a half sashay
‘neath the moon’s where we’re apt to stay
We promenade around fig leaves
with rolled up jeans and shorter sleeves

Hanging out in the doghouse tree
I circle left and she don’t leave me
Promenade with a giddyup
Be home in time for kiss-make-up.

Allemande left as we make things right.
all things beautiful, all things bright.
Weave the ring, a forever link
All ‘lone till life turns blue and pink

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Linda Alice Fowler May 20, 2024 at 11:12 AM Excellent Kim! I've had experience with this type of dance...love the freshness and your take on the contest! GL! :)

Suzette Richards May 18, 2024 at 9:05 AM You have got the hang of it, Kim. Enjoyed :) Kim Rodrigues May 19, 2024 at 4:06 PM Thank you! I appreciate!

Paige Hind May 13, 2024 at 10:37 AM Cute and clever- rhyme flowed great too Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2024 at 2:59 PM Thank you, Paige! :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers May 13, 2024 at 9:18 AM Dear Kim, What a delightful blend of humor and romance—the whimsical imagery and rhythmic flow transport me to a world of love and laughter. I loved your playful use of language and clever wordplay, which make this poem a joy to read. It's a testament to your creativity and skill as a poet. Good Luck! - Blessings, my friend, Daniel Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2024 at 10:21 AM Thank you, Daniel! I had fun writing it. Had to do a bit of research. :)

Panagiota Romios May 13, 2024 at 6:36 AM Awesome, awesome! I felt like getting up and dancing but I can’t do that anymore after I broke my thigh For someone who loves dancing like I do?li..a great bummer.I think I should try the lyrics style. FAV Pangie Romios Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2024 at 7:06 AM Thank you so much, Pangie xx

Vijay Pandit May 13, 2024 at 6:28 AM Fabulous tone and flow, Kim--much enjoyed the exuberance of your poem, my friend. Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2024 at 7:07 AM Thank you, Vijay Hugs~Kim

Victor Buhagiar May 13, 2024 at 1:34 AM I remember many songs with square dancing like Oh Susanna, The Yellow Rose of Texas etc. An excellent poem. Great flow and fine rhymes. Best for a win. Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2024 at 7:07 AM Thank you, Victor! Hugs ~ Kim

Janice Canerdy May 12, 2024 at 7:54 PM Kim, this is EXCELLENT~~creative and entertaining. Janice Kim Rodrigues May 13, 2024 at 7:07 AM Thank you, Janice! Hugs

Jan Allison May 12, 2024 at 3:14 PM you must be a square dancer to have done this so brilliantly Kim, I do swing dancing but just wouldnt know where to start with this theme! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues May 12, 2024 at 5:02 PM Did some research. I had a little experience in school. :)