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Written, May 12, 2024

For the Contest, Intro ''POI''-etry
Sponsor, Hilo Poet

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Yes once, I had a love now, I sigh ! He flew above and I weep a mourning dove ! My grief deep death, oh why ... memories I keep !

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/12/2024 4:37:00 PM

although short, this poem touched my heart; even in your poem's brevity, I felt grief and joy. Well done. Best wishes with the contest...and enjoy your evening, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2024 6:47:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the compliment and comment, yes, though this form was short I found it quite difficult to have the poem make sense, thanks for the encouragement, hugs