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Poetry/Other/Poi/Had
Copyright Protected, ID 05-1644-164-12
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, May 12, 2024

For the International Contest, Intro ''POI''-etry
Sponsor, Hilo Poet, Judged 06/09/2024

Seventh Place

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Had

 
Yes once, I had a love now, I sigh ! He flew above and I weep a mourning dove ! My grief deep death, oh why ... memories I keep !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Miller Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 8:09 AM
Excellent entry to this contest even with all the restrictions, this poem flows, congratulations.
La France Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 11:54 PM
Terry, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulations, hugs
Kendrick Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 5:30 AM
Grief is normal way of handling a very difficult loss in our lives but isn't it wonderful that eventually we are filled with good memories of the person and the sadness lessens. Thank you for sharing this winner. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K
La France Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 7:21 PM
Sara, thank you for the comment, compliment and congratulations, hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 4:36 PM
Interesting use of “had,” flew and dove. Congrats on a heartfelt write!
La France Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 7:15 PM
Kim, thank you for the compliment and congrats, hugs
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 9:30 AM
Constance: A simple way to convey a precious keeping, my friend, Aloha for your participation, William
La France Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 7:16 PM
Hilo, thank you for the contest and my placement, the compliment and honor, hugs
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