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Poetry/Other/Poi/Had
Copyright Protected, ID 05-1644-164-12
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, May 12, 2024

For the International Contest, Intro ''POI''-etry
Sponsor, Hilo Poet, Judged 06/09/2024

Seventh Place

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Yes once, I had a love now, I sigh ! He flew above and I weep a mourning dove ! My grief deep death, oh why ... memories I keep !

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Terry Miller

Date: 6/21/2024 8:09:00 AM

Excellent entry to this contest even with all the restrictions, this poem flows, congratulations.

Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2024 11:54:00 PM

Terry, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulations, hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2024 5:30:00 AM

Grief is normal way of handling a very difficult loss in our lives but isn't it wonderful that eventually we are filled with good memories of the person and the sadness lessens. Thank you for sharing this winner. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K

Constance La France
Date: 6/20/2024 7:21:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the comment, compliment and congratulations, hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/19/2024 4:36:00 PM

Interesting use of “had,” flew and dove. Congrats on a heartfelt write!

Constance La France
Date: 6/19/2024 7:15:00 PM

Kim, thank you for the compliment and congrats, hugs

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/19/2024 9:30:00 AM

Constance: A simple way to convey a precious keeping, my friend, Aloha for your participation, William

Constance La France
Date: 6/19/2024 7:16:00 PM

Hilo, thank you for the contest and my placement, the compliment and honor, hugs