What we said and why, two of the things we will be judged by when punctuated by our creator.
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Comfort zones are for people who don't want to grow. You don't have to choose a bed of nails over a mattress, but you could try acupuncture. Stepping out of your comfort zone doesn't have to be extreme.
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OPEN VERSE imagery,assonance,rhythm,sound symbolism of an intuitive of the self conscious in a crystallised convergence of the moment ,with punctuation implied by the form, interpretation by the reader changing according to mood, thus essentially fluid and inherently variable.
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" Come on now, people have had it far worse than you" Her words cut right through me. Penetrating sharply through my skin, ripping through my veins. Puncturing my heart and tearing my soul. She detected my wounds, lacerating her way through my pain. Exposing deeper, bloody grazes. Bleeding, delayed healing.
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Consider poetic presentation. No words should loiter extraneously. No punctuation intrudes pointlessly.
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