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Once
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11/17/2017 12:34:00 AM
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Critique please for 'Autumn' poem
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Autumn is a flaming sky of burgundy beauty
filled with orange leaves gently dancing
as they fall upon your heart
evoking bittersweet memories
composed with the dying embers of summer
and ending in the faultless taste of
savoury imperfection.
edited by Once on 11/17/2017
edited by Once on 11/17/2017
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