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8/20/2017 8:27:14 AM
Should I continue?	I was just looking at the sunsent and had an urge to write something down. This is what I came up with in a few seconds. The flaming sun just drowned in azure. It kindly left us some debris of light. The earth put on a mystical allure. I looked above and marveled at the sight. English is not my native language and I am not very familiar with English poetry. I don't even know if my "poem" is good or bad. Should I finish it? Should I forget about poetry? Critique this please.
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8/20/2017 8:27:14 AM

I was just looking at the sunsent and had an urge to write something down. This is what I came up with in a few seconds.

The flaming sun just drowned in azure.
It kindly left us some debris of light.
The earth put on a mystical allure.
I looked above and marveled at the sight.

English is not my native language and I am not very familiar with English poetry. I don't even know if my "poem" is good or bad. Should I finish it? Should I forget about poetry?

Critique this please.

pages: 1