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5/16/2015 3:16:06 AM
any thoughts and advice is appreciated	Born in a radioactive life with few friends Rejected from a place he never felt was home He finds himself stranded and alone His eyes blinded by the sun Armed with only a baseball bat and a empty gun The world tears at him with hungry jaws A scorched world with cold hearts and no law Attacked by raider, robots, and death claws The dusty capital wasteland he roams Scavenging the ruins of a desolate world Super mutants appear around every turn The lone wanderer finds a flamethrower and makes them burn Their collection of mutilated organs make him want to hurl Searching for his father and food for the day The lone wanderer hopes and prays Revelation 21:6 I am alpha and omega the beginning and the end Bloody footprints mark where the lone wanders has been Scars mark his wounded heart and are etched in his skin Favoring a shock sword and a 44 magnum Custom armor most wastelanders couldn't fathom The lone wanderer carries the maximum Sailed to point lookout and thrown in the pit The cruel wasteland tests his grit Abducted by creatures from outer space A life of haste, rugged is the beard on his face GNR radio keeps him company The lone wanderer runs about while feeling funky Finally he found his father Together, Persuing a righteous goal ever further Only to die a martyr, his death hits the lone wanderer ever harder The lone wanderer's wrath! Awakening rage A vengeful path, darkening days Kicked out of Jefferson's memorial The enclave takes over, creating total turmoil in the purifier With no time to prepare a funeral for his father The lone wanderer grabs 'Vengeance' the ultimate vaporizer On his way to vault 86 to find the legendary kit of Eden The lone wanderer lays waste to many a demons Troubled by the loss of his best friend, His rampage across the wasteland begins edited by Nitsuj on 5/16/2015 edited by Nitsuj on 5/16/2015
5/16/2015 3:21:10 AM
first poem- Embodiment Of A Sparrow	Deft hand became stifled One man's life becomes a ripple Gauntlet affixes a bridle Proclaimed a idol Fist clenching low Archer's imbued bow Body quivered like his arrows Embodiment of a sparrow Anthem for a obscured soul Wind is a bitter blow Gauntlet's icy hold Prolonged the cold Events transpired, Such that brought down an empire Whistling tone of his arrows Embodiment of sparrows edited by Nitsuj on 5/16/2015
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