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Edw.mommaK71 - all messages by user

1/3/2015 7:00:12 PM
New to the community :)	Hello to everyone, My name is K'. I am new to all of this community stuff, so please forgive me if I sound silly or something. I have been writing for as long as I can remember. All of my poetry is usually based on emotional issues or situations, however I am trying to begin learning to write from an imaginative perspective. I do not have much educational background as far as poetry is concerned, however I feel I am a good writer as are so many of you and I believe that my Heavenly Father has given me every ability that I need to learn whatever I can to go as far in this direction as I choose. Right now let's just say that I'm in it for the pleasure of listening to others and learning. One never knows, someone might listen and learn something from me. God Bless You All. Thank you for letting me join your community.
1/5/2015 7:08:06 AM
CREANIMATION	I waited until the water cleared as it rose above greatheights Swimming was not an option for the current was too heavy I did test my faith and I tried to walk on water, however thedarkness Closed in on me and took me to depths I cannot speak of I awoke in gentle arms carrying me softly to my destination For the struggles of my sustenance where to no avail The symphony played in dedication to my oblivion With each note I descended further into construction Eternity for my soul had been spoken for centuries ago The trees swept like mad house wives in fury All along I sought out peaceful pleasantries with hearts likemine It took a lifetime it seemed to prepare myself for thisoccasion Then in a moment time managed to confront all of my senses My lips tasted like saltwater singed cement heat rocks Dry, cracked and corroded with outrageous stench Portraying a bit of sarcasm, I acted as if I wanted to smile Longing for a shoulder to cry on in my form of decay Sifting through the self-loathing storms of impurities My soul begins to seek torment within the grounds eruption Darkness rains heavily upon my plot against destiny Leaving my existing operation at a formal stand I entertain the notion that I can now swim the rough waters If indeed I should ever get out of the sand. 01-04-15
1/5/2015 7:17:13 AM
CREANIMATION	I was trying to be different and this came out. I don't even know what to call it definition wise? I was studying a bit on this wonderful site and I ran across a few things and here is what I made of it. please tell me if there is anything here other than babble.. Thank you. I'm still learning how to get around as well. I noticed that my /me/EdwmommaK71 was not listed above with the other. Do I need to fix that? Thanks again
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