Poetry Forum

Sydney Avey - all messages by user

6/12/2014 6:46:31 PM
Poetry is my warm up exercise	Hi, What an amazing website. The resources are akin to being given the keys to a private library of curated information tailored to my needs and taste. I am a California girl and a published author who writes poetry when the fiction muse goes on vacation. Poetry clears my head and draws me back to my writing roots, nourishing meaning and beauty so I'm ready when the my fiction muse returns. I'm hoping to improve my poetry skills and will be seeking critiques. Love the friendliness here and look forward to taking breaks in my writing day to sample a little of the soup.
6/12/2014 7:01:00 PM
First PS submission ... Please critiqe	I looked up Requiem and Elysium in the dictionary. So this is about a remembrance of afterlife. Intriguing. Beautiful words here, but I am looking for a story or clear observation that is obscured. Verena and Ozzy's feedback capture my response. The words are beautiful. I need an image I can track so I have an understanding of what it means to remember an afterlife I've yet to experience.
pages: 1