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4/28/2014 7:48:58 AM
New member	Hello to all fellow travelers. A newbie here to this site and I really enjoy it. I have already read so many amazing presentations here! Here is hoping that I find a way not to bring down that high standard. Robert , aka --Tyr
5/3/2014 12:01:47 AM
Looking for advice on how to improve	Please critique this ..... Lost Love's Dream Shadow Deep within a sunlit drop of refreshing rain I saw a glimpse of her beautiful face again Dreams flow past as swift mountain streams she haunts me lovingly in midnight dreams Outside my window the great moon dares to sink more time, more time is all I can think She appears all the more real in her golden gown as the great moon glides slowly slipping down I feel earth trembling deeply into night nothing feels better, nothing feels so right Her voice whispers from shadows all around smiles so deep that it echoes in loving sound As dawn flees upward to meet the newborn day I hear her parting , caressing voice softly say Dreams can not stay , they must go on past our loves are forever and forever they will last......Tyr--04--03--2014 edited by Robert Lindley on 5/3/2014 edited by Robert Lindley on 5/3/2014
5/3/2014 5:20:37 PM
Looking for advice on how to improve	Changes made to the last three lines..
5/23/2014 6:51:44 AM
Looking for more than what I am finding	Being the right person will lead you to finding the right person. I found mine ten years ago after a failed 4 year and later a failed 22 year marriage and my right person was on the other side of the planet! Never give up and think positive!
6/5/2014 11:22:21 PM
New old guy	LooknGlass wrote: Hi all, my name is James. I'm a 50 year old poet and lyricist who can't go a day without writing something. I look forward to reading the works of the many poets I see on this site, and making new friends. Write on my friend. Let your spirit roam , write a poem or a tome..
9/15/2015 9:58:58 PM
Controversial Contest	SassyLady wrote: I would like to submit a poem to the contest titled 'Controversial" sponsored by Charlotte Puddifoot. I can find it under the heading Contest Status Member but can't post from there. When I go to Contests I can't find it. The deadline is in October so I wonder if it's closed or just not available to me. I DO NOT SEE THAT CONTEST ON THE CURRENT CONTEST ROSTER HERE. It either closed early or else was removed by the sponsor... I have in the past missed several contests due to early closings. Any help with this is greatly appreciated. Thanks, Sassy
10/3/2019 3:57:00 PM
Some missing masterpieces!	Yes Bob A, we should take great note of your prowess over that of such a giant and a legendary poet, as was Poe. Did you wash your arrogant clothes-because your bias is showing methinks. edited by Robert Lindley on 10/3/2019
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