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1/7/2015 1:31:54 PM
Critiques?	I love your descriptions in this poem, the meaning I took from this poem is that love is evolution, I enjoyed the read!
1/7/2015 1:46:54 PM
I welcome your feedback!	I feel sane in a mad world How I wish to be mad like the others I want to hide under the covers And pretend that I am free My logic is chaotic here Where fear is power and kindness is rare I have no place in such a place This is the torment I face I feel myself becoming distant I want no association with this tyrant I want no ties to dead environments I want to thrive to not feel guilt for being alive Because I do Its either there's not enough food Or not enough room but I have both And so many don't Our lives and our meanings Have become assets of greed we are no longer the gardeners we are the weeds edited by sarahm1994 on 1/7/2015
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