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1/28/2014 8:24:46 PM
New to PS and writing in general, Please critique	The Zen of Words I sing to the unfathomable cloaked magic shimmering within the time soaked letters of words Arranged be they may by softly nuanced soliloquy, birthing pastel pallets of harmony Or Gnarled in the darkly fiendish toxic wasteland of soul bruising nihilist chaos I wonder at the providence that incites the inspiration from thought to page…beginner to sage Rudderless, exanimate, benign letters first inert and afar then shot from the stars: …starting and ending wars …bending and blowing minds …mending and breaking hearts So foray boldly to that less traveled page you prose rich lingual imagists I’ll look for your words in the rose hewn shards of the setting sun
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1/28/2014 8:24:46 PM

New to PS and writing in general, Please critique

The Zen of Words

I sing to the unfathomable cloaked magic shimmering within the time soaked letters of words
Arranged be they may by softly nuanced soliloquy, birthing pastel pallets of harmony
Or
Gnarled in the darkly fiendish toxic wasteland of soul bruising nihilist chaos
I wonder at the providence that incites the inspiration from thought to page…beginner to sage
Rudderless, exanimate, benign letters first inert and afar then shot from the stars:
…starting and ending wars
…bending and blowing minds
…mending and breaking hearts
So foray boldly to that less traveled page you prose rich lingual imagists
I’ll look for your words in the rose hewn shards of the setting sun

pages: 1