Poetry Forum
John-Ovan.P.Hull
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12/10/2011 8:51:24 AM
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Introduction
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Likewise, I have been writing a little for a while now, this is also my fist poetry website, and all seems to be going well, seems like a nice friendly funny bunch of people on here.
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12/10/2011 9:02:59 AM
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Unsure about things? What do you think?
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I like the way I see the world, but im not sure im expressing myself to my full potential, certain bits seem a little elementary? Not sure the syllables match(or if it matters?)
So many tears, I have cried,
since hearing news you had died,
all day long, my cheeks not dried,
to say goodbye, i truly tried.
Now I sense you everywhere,
the wind that courses through my hair,
all around, I know your there,
on rainy days and weather fair.
I gaze upon my favourite star,
and wonder if...that's where you are?
distance between us, seems so far,
wish I had a cosmic car.
Memories of you, I clasp so tight,
cried to sleep, too tired to fight,
broken rest, but that's alright...
for in my dreams we meet each night! edited by John-Ovan.P.Hull on 12/10/2011
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12/19/2011 7:26:28 AM
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Where does my soupmail outbound messages appear??
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I know how to read and reply to soup mail, but it doesnt seem to keep a record of mail that i send, its nice to re-read what has been sent to make sure I dont go repeating myself all the time!
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12/19/2011 7:34:36 AM
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Soup Mail
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I seem to be in the same boat! I have some correspondence through soupmail, it has kept the messages I recieved but doesnt appear to have saved the replies that I sent!
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