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Spiros Zafiris
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3/16/2017 11:09:37 PM
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O chair
upon which I rest
you'll outlast me
the seconds grimly laugh,
stand-up-comic-like
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..2017..©2017 Spiros Zafiris
Note: in another workshop it was suggested I make it:
O chair
upon which I rest
you'll outlast me—
the seconds grimly laugh
like a stand-up comic
~
..2017..©2017 Spiros Zafiris
Note: dear reader, do you prefer tanka a) or b)
or,perhaps, you have other suggestions..
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3/18/2017 10:36:43 PM
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..thanks, Shubham..
.>sp
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3/25/2017 6:19:45 AM
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..thanks, Doug..
.>sp
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edited by Spiros Zafiris on 3/25/2017
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