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5/15/2023 10:49:24 AM
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This is my first poem, asking for some insight
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The Whispers of Lonesome Strength
A sentiment of lonesomeness embraces my soul
As I deeper try to occult the despair the more it seems to conquer myself
What amplifies the unfortunate plight originates from my only source of rest
I have come to embrace the bittersweet yet empowering realization that I am my own unwavering support And in the presence of love's possibly, I can't know with certainty
Yet, the hope shall prevail
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5/28/2023 9:54:10 AM
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This is my first poem, asking for some insight
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Thanks for the reply! I am currently 15. I really didn't have any inspiration, I just took a paper and started to write. We were reading the Merchant of Venice in class (great play in my opinion), so that probably has something to do with it
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