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9/8/2010 4:32:41 PM
New to this site ..... Love it, its Awesome	My name is Ryland Matthews, i was looking aroud the internet for a place to share my poetry with others that would enjoy reading it, while i have found that here i have also found something more. A place where a lot of people come to share the writing, many different styles and a lot of passion. Ill be around for a long time, this site is great and i look forward to reading everytrhing available ...... so once again hello and thanks for the awesome site
9/9/2010 2:29:44 AM
Please let me know	Ive only posted six poems on this website, this is the only time that i have ever shared my peotry with anyone outside of my family and friends and would just like to know what you think ...... what changes i could make in my writing style to improve what i do in the future .... thanks My heart keeps beating While my body dies, my heart keeps beating As the world sighs, this heart keeps repeating A strangled cry, a desolate embrace Of a flower strewn grave. Of a lover erased. A dream long ago fulfilled, it no longer lingers Brought to despair by Thanatos’ brushing fingers As my feet move me forward, one step at a time I keep looking back to that witch was mine. I can’t help but wander what wrath I did incur To bring me to this place, this pain I must endure At the precipice of madness my mind will now dwell The horrors made real, all the ravages of hell. And in this world what we sew we must go reaping And even without a soul My Heart Keeps Beating.
8/14/2011 10:13:45 PM
My blog	just dropping in to see if anyone can help ... i am having trouble posting a new blog, i have posted a few in the past but now everytime i try to post a new one on the members page all i get is a blank screen, not sure if there is something that i am doing wrong or if it has to do with something with the sight. any help would be apreciated. thanks ... Ryland
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