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3/9/2022 4:45:02 PM
Please help critique my poem	It's kinda a Pantoum but I added an extra line Love is confusing. Let me explain The experience is lacking and It only brings pain Let me explain The idea sounds amazing but really It only brings pain and Confusion The idea sounds amazing but really It's hard, the Confusion Leaves everybody on their guard It's hard The experience is lacking and Leaves everybody on their guard So in conclusion, Love is confusing.
3/11/2022 7:31:18 PM
Please help critique my poem	While I appreciate the feedback and understand that this is a high-critique forum, perhaps the best way prodive helpful, constructive criticism is to not insult people and actually provide advice. I also understand that this is not exactly a Pantoum. I simply find the format of Pantoums an interesting challenge, even if I don't follow all the rules.
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