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7/23/2010 1:45:58 PM
Request for critique	I'm not sure how this works. i've posted a few pieces, made some friends, but gotten very little constructive feedback. I'm not here to bash anyone's writing (If I don't like it, I won't cvomment), but if I do see some way I can help the poet or the poem i am not afraid to give my opinion (which doesn't hold as much importance as the opinion of the writer). I am here to improve my craft, (among other things, like sharing ideas I've been entrusted with). I just posted what I consider to be one of my best... it is called "The Party is Over". It carries a vital Biblical concept that most don't understand they possess (whether you are a believer or not). I would welcome any help in polishing this piece (and... I'm not opposed to "loved it" or "hated it" either). Thanks in advance to anyone willing to take the challenge. - Kevin Pace WordsDoMatter
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7/23/2010 1:45:58 PM

I'm not sure how this works. i've posted a few pieces, made some friends, but gotten very little constructive feedback. I'm not here to bash anyone's writing (If I don't like it, I won't cvomment), but if I do see some way I can help the poet or the poem i am not afraid to give my opinion (which doesn't hold as much importance as the opinion of the writer). I am here to improve my craft, (among other things, like sharing ideas I've been entrusted with).

I just posted what I consider to be one of my best... it is called "The Party is Over". It carries a vital Biblical concept that most don't understand they possess (whether you are a believer or not). I would welcome any help in polishing this piece (and... I'm not opposed to "loved it" or "hated it" either). Thanks in advance to anyone willing to take the challenge. - Kevin Pace WordsDoMatter

pages: 1