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10/28/2019 10:24:17 AM
Right to left/left to write	Dearly beloved I'm engaging in writing prose, primary as a release valve. I'm not a happy bunny, and instead of writing a diary, I feel more inclined to add creativity to the words, hence poetry. I have written 3 or 4 poems 25 years ago, but have not had any education in english literature at school (I grew up in the middle east), neither poetry workshops. I am a self taught, in many subjects, and would appreciate constructive criticism from yourselves. I dont want 'nice boy, well done' ; I want to take from here guidance, in particular feedback on your emotions after you have read my prose. I need to know if what I'm communicating is getting across. That will be much appreciated. edited by Yoni on 10/28/2019 edited by Yoni on 10/28/2019
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10/28/2019 10:24:17 AM

Dearly beloved I'm engaging in writing prose, primary as a release valve. I'm not a happy bunny, and instead of writing a diary, I feel more inclined to add creativity to the words, hence poetry. I have written 3 or 4 poems 25 years ago, but have not had any education in english literature at school (I grew up in the middle east), neither poetry workshops. I am a self taught, in many subjects, and would appreciate constructive criticism from yourselves. I dont want 'nice boy, well done' ; I want to take from here guidance, in particular feedback on your emotions after you have read my prose. I need to know if what I'm communicating is getting across. That will be much appreciated.
edited by Yoni on 10/28/2019
edited by Yoni on 10/28/2019

pages: 1