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seancejames
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7/24/2018 9:01:05 AM
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Prose - Looking for Constructive Criticism Only!
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Short poem, looking for serious critique. At present, the work is untitled so some title ideas wouldn't hurt, either. Anyway, y'all go nuts:
He asked,
“Why does this always happen?”
I did not answer.
How do you tell him
it is you.
You choose women
so beautiful and full of love,
that they cannot help but
offer you some.
edited by seancejames on 7/24/2018
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