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9/2/2023 8:41:50 PM
Ceasar Brantley
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My love and I sang madrigals for fun
As we exchanged our hearts, one evening’s tryst.
She masqueraded as a coyish one
And bade me steal no kisses from her lips.
Her hidden beauty kept behind a veil
Did only serve to stir up passion’s plea
A throbbing bosom which would not be ailed
Crescendoed like a marchman’s timpani
Alas! Our twilight escapade did cease
It’s memory now floats upon the wind
Besides, she was truly a dreadful tease
She left me guessing what was in her mind
One starry night, two lovers on the lane
Would dare unite, yet return not again.
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9/6/2023 9:24:26 AM
Bob Atkinson
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Yep, finally someone got the point of what Poetry's all about.
Love it.
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