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8/18/2023 6:46:19 AM

Yash Agrawall
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PEOPLE
~Yash Agrawall




Fighting from myself in my mind;
I don’t want to think what I’m thinking.
Not following rules, didn’t even try;
Hearing rumours that messed up my life.

I don’t know where to find peace;
just want to put my mind at ease.
I don’t really understand this species,
looking at a camera and saying cheese.
Investing on every other filth,
Not realising they are actually bills.

Why are humans so complicated?
Why do they have to make filth overrated?
They would love their pets,
and keep them domesticated.

Why can’t they be simple,
and not follow every other ritual?
Why do they have to make stupid rules,
and waste all of their joules?


Setting up court and law,
But not getting justice at all.
Having police for our safety,
But they don’t monitor each and every activity.

Doctors are at duty,
but people are dying off acidity.
Politicians are at work,
Most of them are a bunch of jerks.
Where are we heading this way?
Being the hunter and also the prey.

Can we all please come together?
And try to makes things better
Build a sustainable future
Instead of abusing each other.
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