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2/7/2023 8:01:31 AM
Di11y Da11y
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I'm no expert but my thoughts are that bright and lightning create a jolt that is an unpleasing meter. I'm afraid I also find it difficult to understand the context or subject.
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2/7/2023 9:54:18 AM
Agron Elezi
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adrenaline wrote:
I'm no expert but my thoughts are that bright and lightning create a jolt that is an unpleasing meter. I'm afraid I also find it difficult to understand the context or subject.
Thank for your try
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