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3/15/2012 3:01:58 AM

My Room

The sanctuary truth

Peace and harmony for all

Sweetness for me

I walk down the hall

Towards my a home

My room

My humble abode
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3/27/2012 6:52:16 AM

Kara McLain
Posts: 7
the rhythm on this seems very steed to me. rather soothing
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