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8/4/2022 1:57:46 AM

mike roberts
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pins and needles sewn across the bed in threads of yellow-brown and rosy red stitched across my sheets and embroidered to my bed and pillow eye to eye with pins and needles a prickly pair pinned to my bed and pillow
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