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2/9/2022 11:53:06 AM
Nazim ZarSinner
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Once I leave, the world - my words - will not remind forever?
Tourist eyes - to the velvet vales - will turn blind forever
Is she a prisoner in the Castle of Red Curtains?
Will she be paroled? Remain in pains behind forever?
"This world was never my home: I ne'er felt at ease in it"
We'll have to erase this thought from people's mind forever
Harmony is impossible in each and every pair
The north pole to the south pole, you cannot bind forever
When a flower scatters, millions bloom there to take its place
Though you are good but the world will not be kind forever
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