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11/12/2021 4:20:51 PM
John Roth
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Standing tall amongthe grass,
spots of dirt dotthe stem,
it's mane yellow andpointed,
emanating smells ofplaydough,
green rufflesjutting out like teeth,
the center yellowand soft, looking to the sun.
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11/23/2021 11:12:24 PM
Eduardo Richardson
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Great verse, nice and comfortable storytelling. Some melancholy is felt in your poem.
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