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Forum Home » Be Gentle » attempting to write a tanka poem - new to this!

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7/11/2021 3:23:53 AM

Liz Archer
Posts: 2 		gardens full of trees

ponds full of waterlillies

all pink and yellow

some beautiful blue mayfly

landong on the green grasses
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