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6/27/2021 4:37:41 AM A.K.M. Islam Posts: 1	Running out of time, For What? Who are you? Do I know you? No. Is it only me who has these feelings? Or, Is it reciprocated? Why don't you talk to me? Why can't you look at me? When our eyes meet Why do you look away? Why are you doing this? Who are you???
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6/28/2021 8:50:43 AM Josefina Costales Posts: 9	Ixas wrote: Running out of time, For What? Who are you? Do I know you? No. Is it only me who has these feelings? Or, Is it reciprocated? Why don't you talk to me? Why can't you look at me? When our eyes meet Why do you look away? Why are you doing this? Who are you???
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6/28/2021 8:51:36 AM Josefina Costales Posts: 9	Is this a poem? Did you post this on Podtrysoup
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