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12/21/2011 5:47:34 PM

Angelina Dickson
Posts: 2
Other than a few minor style things I would personally change, I read this and felt moved by what you were trying to convey. Very nice.
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12/22/2011 12:58:11 PM

Tom Larrow
Posts: 4
Eloquently put, I personally think it's because of man's need to blame others to justify himself. I think the flow is good and the idea of a hate free horizon is great but, until man deals with his enemies within this will not come to pass.
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